Story of the Miniature Castle
The princess was looking out the glass windows watching the sun rising while the Tall trees tower over the miniature castle with stone walls and a wooden door. As princess bella sadly glazed out side she could help but think about her dad when he had an accident when bella was a little girl. There's a knock on the door bella runs down the stairs and shouts “who is it mum” then the queen tells her to stay up stairs and don't come down.bella was now locked in her room no way to get out excepted the window she takes a deep breath and carefully climbed out the window bella was on her tiptoes on the edge of the roof she makes her way down safely. bella mysteriously glazed at an old man in the minicher castle will wondering who he his, she feels like she knows him but can’t remember. bella slowly opens the window and stats to go through but all of a sudden her short blue dress rips on the window queen Pearl sees bella and says “what are you doing how did you get there you were locked in your room!!”
There was no reply so bella gets out of the window and runs back to her room sadly. it was now tea time pearl calls bella down as bella walks down the stairs she tries to cover the rips in her dress she sits down sadly and makes no eye contact with queen pearl and doesn't talk at all.she thinks to herself who was that man should i ask mum or not she goes for it and asks the queen who he was, the queen replies taking a deep breath and saying that was her grandfather saying your dad is alive but is in the real world with the giant humans. bella's eyes light up like a star not knowing what to say with a whole lot of questions in her head.
Positive:
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have used really descriptive words .
Thoughtful:
This reminded me of a story i’ve read before.
Helpful:
Next time read through your story and make sure it makes sense before posting.
Added a question?
Did you find it hard to write that much ? Do you usually use descriptive words like the ones you did in your story ?